BOOK EBOOK deflowered Eight Tasks for the Blushing Virgin #1 AUTHOR Aphrodite Hunt – doctorio.us
Aphrodite Hunt Deflowered Aphrodite Hunt 2013Aphrodite Hunt s opener for the Eight Tasks for the Blushing Virgin series a 60pp novella in the seemingly exploding enre of romance masuerading as porn is as I write this absent from less than two weeks after I picked it up there free I m a little confused as to why since I have now read it and can t imagine any of the contents here would have sparked the ire of the usual braindead suspects who Shotgun Wedding (Silhouette Yours Truly, get up in arms about stuff and try usually successfully s the pity toet it pulled from for being offensive It s not all that reat thanks to some stylistic uirks but it s certainly not offensive unless you re the kind of hardcore prude who s up in arms about FX showing a flash of naked butt every once in a whileAs a side note while I don t know this for certain I m assuming from the series title that
there will be eight novellas in this series according to the extensive liner will be eight novellas in this series according to the extensive liner here four have been published so farThe plot our Blushing Virgin is Sofia just turned eighteen of course raised in a strict Catholic school of course and has never even
touched herself of course much less anyone else touch her of course It seems her father is in dutch to herself of course much less anyone else touch her of course It seems her father is in dutch to big time bookie Nicholas Greco to the tune of fifty rand As her parents are blue collar there s no way they can come up with that kind of scratch so Sofia decides to Innocent Sins (Harlequin Presents, go to Nicholas and offer up her body as payment for her father sambling debts Now. SHE SOUGHT TO SELL HER VIRGINITY TO PAY HER FATHER'S DEBTS LITTLE DID SHE KNOW HOW DESIRABLE SHE WOULD FIND HIS CRUEL DEBTORSofia Moreno has been brought up to be a Only a Whisper good Catholicirl But that didn't stop her father from chalking up a huge ambling debt one he must pay or an enforcer will break his legsUnbeknownst to her family Sofia seeks to pay this debt in the only way she knows how by. .
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Diculous six pages here and the end you don t even want to know how much that ebook authors traditionally Use To Bulk Out Their to bulk out their I expect some of it but Hunt
GOES WAY WAY OVERBOARD I Mway way overboard I m in future offerings she ll tone it down a littleThe second problem rests with Sofia s narrative voice While her character is consistent enough and I bought her thoughts and reactions all the way through her voice has a tendency to o from pristine Catholic school Brooklyn's Song girl to sailor sometimes switching halfway through a sentence Weo in the space of a few paragraphs for example to I have never really touched myself down there I don t masturbate or explore or think about things like these to His eyes raked my pussy Well then Sofia you ve obviously thought about things like these enough to know the word pussy Not the kind of word you d expect from someone who demurely referred to her pubic area as down there a couple of paragraphs previousThat may be a minor thing to you or it may be a major thing For all I know Hunt is playing to a specific niche like an innocent irl who talks filthy in bed market or something that I don t even know exists For me it was major enough to knock the rating down pretty hard but that doesn t mean I haven t thrown the other three parts extant so far on my TBR list Both Sofia and Nicholas are relatable characters though I m not entirely sure they re likable yet I m interested enough to continue on and find out though. D But nothing is as simple as it appears She must contend with Alyssa his cunning best friend who is secretly in love with him and who would do anything to destroy rivals for his affection And then there is the added complication of Nicholas's beautiful son Paul DEFLOWERED sets up the central conflicts for the EIGHT TASKS FOR THE BLUSHING VIRGIN erotica drama series It contains 20000 words. If this were actual porn you would
Have Been Instructed Where To Tuneah Kiddingbeen instructed where to tuneah kidding if it had been actual porn Nicholas would have immediately accepted the offer ot down to doing the
and by the time these sixty pages had been exhausted both Nicholas and Sofia would be after trying out at least two dozen different positions and probably roping in Nicholas strongman Abe and just to twist the knife on you a bit every time I saw Abe s name I mentally added Vigoda You re welcome and his PA Alyssa as well Heck maybe even Nicholas late wife Karina But as I throw all this out there especially when I add that a Nicholas is still mourning said late wife and b Alyssa has long had feelings for Nicholas and he knows it you can feel the ticklingsdeed and by the time these sixty pages had been exhausted both Nicholas and Sofia would be
OF PLOT STRINGS THERE CAN Tplot strings there can t And they are there indeed plus the usual if a bit atypical in this case romance setup before the big bang Rest assured this is solidly in the romance section not the porn section And it s pretty well plotted at least so far Enough so that I wish I were rating this higherSuch however will not be the case because of two laring problems The first and easiest dispensed with is that while the book does clock in at sixty pages an unacceptable number of them are liner notes If I say liner notes when talking about music you know exactly what I mean In book form I m talking about the stuff at the beginning other novels by which is usually a page in print books stretched a ri. Giving up the most precious thing she possesses her virginity And she must surrender it to the man who now holds her father's life Nicholas GrecoNicholas is handsome tyrannical and ruthless He has no choice In the world he inhabits he must command respect through physical force or his beloved family will be mown down and slain by his enemiesSofia must now enter and navigate his brutal worl. ,